Of course the widow didn’t spend every red cent of her husband’s earnings on building the apartment homes. But she came close.
Naturally, things were tight at first.
So she relied on her son to help stretch the ends. And he did. And that was a great comfort to her.
Not that she doubted him, for he was able and it was expected. But it was the way he did it, nobly, and with aplomb, that she especially appreciated.
Some mothers in her position worried constantly about their sons. Street gangs circled them like unscrupulous men circled her. Headlines blared the terrible things these boys did…and the terrible things that happened to them.
But not her son.
He was as steady as her resolve was hard. Together they made quite the team, her baking pies and taking in laundry, him handy with hammer, nails and paintbrush.
On the occasion when she detected resentment (a click of the tongue, the excessive straightening of a collar or cuff) she let it go.
He loved her. Of this she knew and never waivered.
It was only natural that he wanted her hands to be soft and her mind to be uncluttered. It was only natural for her to trust him. And for him to trust her. When he turned over his earnings, she never inquired; they always exceeded her calculations.
And so when he turned up for dinner one evening in a new shirttail and trousers–with his shoes resoled, no less–she didn’t inquire about that either.
But, from then on, she never bought him another thing. No, not even a present for his birthday. Or Christmas.
She gave him money instead.

Nice story Pam…poignant..in its way
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Thank you, June. It pleases me that you think so.
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This flows so well…it sets up mental pictures really well like a movie.
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Thanks, Max. It’s nice to know that you get what I was aiming for.
These first few posts are the introduction–very story like. I’m kind of channeling McCabe & Mrs. Miller (or trying to) like I’m a sage fly on the wall.
My intent is to modernize and personalize it more as the story shifts to more contemporary times. But I don’t know. I’ll see where it takes me, if anywhere.
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On the first one…I thought I had it figured out…little did I know. You have a gift for that Pam…and that is just not me saying that. Believe me…I tried not to rip you off…but for a same vibe… and I will admit it. It’s not easy. Like a noir detective describing a scene…I guess that is the best way I can put it. If that makes sense.
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Ha! I’m not worried about you ripping me off, Max! I know you wouldn’t do that. As for the vibe of the SS Morrell story…I thought it was good. It didn’t stand out as being inspired by me. It just stood out as good writing.
I’ve always thought you were a good writer, and, if I may be so bold…I think you are a better writer now than when I first started reading you. That’s no surprise. As you know…you get better with practice, especially if you start from a good place, which you did.
If I have influenced you as a writer…well, that’s a huge complement. And I can tell that I have…a little. Your writing is more personal/personalized now. Personalization is a big part of my style. But you’ve done it in your own way–and that’s what artists do.
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Well thank you Pam…but all I do is conversational writing. I wanted to try to do something else….but I never wanted to be “flowery” and you stay away from that as well.
It’s learning how to build suspense…that’s what I’m working on now. But Pam….you made my night! I appreciate what you said…but I still have a lot of work to do. I told CB and everyone else…that to me…you are the best writer I’ve read on WP. So what you said to me was the biggest compliment yet!
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You always leave me wanting more. The best compliment I can give a serialised story.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you, Pete. That’s a very nice complement.
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Im reading a bunch of old American short stories. This fits right in Pam. I couldnt resist.
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Oh, that’s so cool CB. Thank you.
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