Lenny wasn’t what you call a morning person. He usually didn’t get into to bed until two or three a.m., so he didn’t get up until ten or eleven. And when he did get up, he wasn’t exactly a breath of sunshine. It was a quirk of his mostly otherwise affable disposition.
Of course, Trish knew this. So on her days off, she usually waited for him to call.
On that day Lenny got up a little earlier than usual. He went through his typical morning routine:
- feed Griffin
- clean the tank, feed the fish and count them, top off the water
- dust, sweep and vacum
- do 50 crunches and 100 push-ups
- eat a bowl of Cap’n Crunch or Coco Puffs cereal
- check the Ranchero GT for bug splatter, polish if needed (it didn’t)
- take a shower and call Trish if she was off (she was)
Lenny let the phone ring and ring. She didn’t answer.
He didn’t think too much of it. There were plenty of things for him to do, so he did them. A couple of hours later he called her back. She still didn’t answer. So he drove to her apartment.
On his way, he worried. Was she okay? Did she trip getting out of the tub and hit her head on the toilet? He had a friend who did that and died from a blood clot to the brain.
And he thought about things, like why she never gave him a key to her apartment? And why she wouldn’t move in with him?
When he got there he bounded up the steps to her third floor apartment. There was an envelope taped to her door with his name written in her slanted, swirling script. He ripped it open. Inside was a letter.
Lenny,
I’m sorry. It was never my intention to hurt you, though I knew from the beginning that I would. Well, almost from the beginning. At first you were an indulgence, like a second piece of cake. But you were so much more than that…You are so much than that.
I was selfish. You made me feel alive. It felt so good to care, to laugh and to share things. It has been so long since I felt anything. I was relieved to know that I could.
There are so many things I wish I could tell you…I know you just want to know why. You deserve to know, but I can’t tell you…But I want you to know this…You are a nice man, Lenny. Not a nice guy…You’re not just some Joe Blow I met while slinging drinks…I’ve never really known a nice man before.
I wish I could be a nice woman because that’s what you deserve. But I can’t be what I’m not. I wish I could stay with you. I want to stay with you. But I can’t.
You told me some things about Rachel…She wasn’t a nice woman either, Lenny. I don’t want you to end up with someone like her or me. You deserve so much better. You deserve someone who will share with you…Someone who will walk down a two way street with you.
That’s what I want for you. That’s what I hope for you.
Trish
Oh dear. Lenny gets a ‘Dear John’. I have a feeling he is not going to leave it at that.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I know. Poor guy. He won’t listen to good advice and he can’t leave well enough alone. But you know what they say…the heart wants what the heart wants. And I want a cheeseburger for dinner. Ha!
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I guess Lenny got pushed into the Friend Zone but I hope he really understands that Trish was trying to protect him. Loving this serial…..
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I’m pleased you are sticking with it, Michael. Yes, the friend zone is the safe zone but, like most of us, he’d rather hang out in the fun zone. You really can’t blame him…
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“Sticking with it”? Pam,I am really loving this story and I can’t WAIT to see where you’re talking us. Is this a book idea that you have,if not,it should.
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Thanks, Michael. Yeah, I’m thinking about making it into a book…I finished a book I had been working on for a long time (years) two years ago. It was a big time learning experience. I touted it as a character driven psychological thriller, but it was a mix of genres which, kind of, doomed it. Apparently, if it’s not LITERATURE, it needs to conform to a genre template–for the most part. Plus, it was LONG…almost 500 pages. I had an agent that was briefly interested but turned me down. She gave me some helpful advice though. So…maybe…I’ve got a couple of other irons in the fire. I’m currently working on a true crime book.
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Continuing nicely Pam 🙂
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Thanks, June.
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Great post 🙂 That letter Trish wrote is quite moving. Anyway, keep up the great work as always 🙂
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Thank you John. I’m pleased that you are reading.
–Pam
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The poor guy will probably not take a chance again…unless he finds out more.
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Don’t feel too sorry for Lenny, Max. This is is noir, after all…
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lol… Yes I’m not good at looking ahead.
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Hi Pam, I’m enjoying the story! I’m liking this twist in the plot 🙂
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Thanks, DW. I’m writing it on the fly so I’m riding out the twists too.
–Pam
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That sounds like fun. I improvised a long bedtime story over several weeks rocking my four year old son to sleep. So much fun! (Wish I could remember it!)
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Poor Lenny. I don’t think he is going to leave this alone.
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Right, John. He’s in the land of noir, after all. Thanks for reading.
–Pam
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“Don’t feel too sorry for Lenny,” huh? Mmm. Interesting! He won’t be able to stop himself from looking under that rock. Who wants to look under the rock? No one! Especially when all the little things under there go squirming and scattering away. But he’ll look anyway. But we should NOT feel sorry for him…?
Yeah, whenever you would write up movies and books I would be thinking, “Why doesn’t Pam write her own noir stuff?” But apparently you already have, lol !! Of course !! You have a great voice. I’ve seen genre-mash-ups before that are VERY popular. Don’t don’t know what that idiot agent’s problem was, lol !!
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To be completely honest, Stacey, I don’t know where this thing is going…It’s kind’a like jazz. I’m improvising as I go along. But, yeah, within the spirit of noir, nobody’s “the good guy,” everybody’s got skeleton’s rattling in closets, basements, storage units…Ha!
Actually, the agent was very helpful to me…She told me that these days–more than ever–agents are looking for the “sure thing.” They want to sell books. They have to sell books. So, they won’t take a chance on something that’s more unorthodox unless it’s really special. I appreciated her advice. And I appreciate your support. I admire you both.
–Pam
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Thanks, Pam!
I guess I was a little harsh about the agent. That IS good advice. Honesty’s the best policy. Genre mash-ups ARE popular…but it probably is after the author already has a following, and that’s what people are expecting.
I admire the fact that you’re improvising as you go. I generally need an outline first that points the way. Sometimes I can kinda just do stream of consciousness on a short story, and it’ll work once in a great while. But longer things–no way.
So PROPS!
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I want a Ford Ranchero gt. They looks so cool.
Note to self from part 3…. I’ve never tried W.L. Weller bourbon! Added to my to do list 🙂
Actually my to do list also has start crushes and push-ups after today (Bank Holiday). Haha I’d be pushed to do 10 of each. Tbh I’ll be happy if I can do 10 of each and still live. LOL
Oh she left him a “Dear John letter”! Poor Lenny. Hope he don’t take his anger out on little Griffin! Oh course not! Griffin is his constant.
You see I get there eventually. Lenny with my bacon and eggs this morning. A thrilling and interesting read Pam. Such a shame Samuel Fuller isn’t around no more. I’d get him on the blower and tell him to get the old chair out again, Lenny’s for the making!
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Aww…thanks, Mikey. Yes, I love the Ranchero GT, IF–and that’s a big if, in case you didn’t notice–it’s a 69 to 72. Those are the best years. 68’s good and so is the 73, but anything beyond that is janky–they’ve got those big bumper guards on them. Clunky.
About the Weller…it’s the poor person’s Pappy Van Winkle, the latter is one of the best bourbon’s in the world. Weller is very smooth…the taste is not outstanding, but it’s good.
So I guess guys really hate getting the “Dear John.” That’s been the general consensus.
Rejection sucks, no question, but there are worse things.
So, yeah, Samuel Fuller would be very at home in today’s cinema world. Fuller was very unique; Off beat, though he didn’t consider himself that way. To him, his world was very normal. Ha!
I watched two current and recurrent films recently, both staring Elijah Wood–very good actor, I think–“Come to Daddy” and “I Don’t Feel at Home in this World Anymore”…Oh, man! Great films! Both are mashups of black comedy, thriller and horror…Come to Daddy is more psychological thriller…Very weird. Very Samuel Fuller.
Well, have a good one, Mikey.
–Pam
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