The first thing Lenny did was double check the parking lot. Trish’s white Honda Civic was nowhere in site.
From there he drove to the exit and cruised through a convenience store parking lot, the one he knew she filled up at. She wasn’t there either.
Then he took the interstate to Carrows where, Wendal, Trish’s manager told him she’d picked up her check and quit–left him shorthanded.
Wendal was disappointed in Trish, but he told Lenny he’d take her back if she showed up. Lenny told him he’d tell her.
From Carrows, he jumped on the interstate. He checked the gas stations and convenience stores on the last three exits and then headed out of town.
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The hostess led him to a table for one, which he refused, asking for a booth instead. He ordered pinot noir before dinner, and cabernet sauvignon with rack of lamb in mustard sauce, spicey cucumber salad and grilled carrots with purple potatoes.
He sipped his pinot while he watched the couple in the booth to right of him, hoping he would have time for desert.
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Lenny timed himself according to Trish’s itinerary…rather, the itinerary he presumed she was going by.
For instance, he knew she didn’t like to drive at night so he estimated where she’d be on her route about thirty minutes before the sun went down.
And he called her–an embarrassing amount of times.
It always went straight voice mail.
Until finally she answered.
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Ranger sat in the atrium next to the water fountain with a Stoli/cranberry straight up and watched the heavy, wood-carved door to Sullivan’s Cove.
He didn’t read. He didn’t piddle with his phone. He just watched.
Finally the couple came out.
He mirrored them, walking with them side by side, if not for the atrium wall. They approached the elevator at the same time. He stumbled into them while simultaneously, stealthily jabbing the man in the stomach with the needle of the syringe. The man doubled over as the door opened and they spilled into the elevator.
“Sorry about that,” he said.
The man backed into a corner of the elevator. He gasped, his eyes wide, his face confused. The woman draped her arms around him.
“Drew! What’s the matter?”
“Is he okay?”
“I don’t know. You must have knocked his breath out!”
“Oh my gosh! Do you want to go to your floor or…”
The man was gulping as if he couldn’t catch his breath.
“No! Open the door.”
He pushed the button and the elevator door opened. He bolted into the lobby. “I’ll notify the front desk, ” he said.
But he didn’t. He walked out the revolving doors which led to the parking lot instead. Quickly.
But not too quickly.
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Lenny wheeled the serving cart quietly to Trish’s side of the bed. He unwrapped the cellophane covering the water and juice glasses and peeked under the cloches.
Soft scrambled eggs, link sausage and a single pancake. No syrup. Tomato on the side. A pot of black coffee. Check, check, check and check.
He sat on the edge of the bed and watched Trish sleep. The nasty beginnings of a purple bruise was visible on her upper arm, just below her bare shoulder. Already, he could make out faint finger marks.
Nausea gripped the pit of his stomach. Disgust mixed with caustic bile scorched his throat.
But he couldn’t wait for her to sleep any longer.
He placed his hand gently on her hip and shook it.
Great story so far 🙂 You know the scene with Drew and the elevator – for a minute there, I thought he was having some kind of panic attack and would be hospitalized as a result, but it turned out to be something 90 or 95% different than I expected. High compliment indeed 🙂 Anyway, keep up the great work as always 🙂
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Right. My intention is to make the reader’s interaction with the hitman, Ranger, very impersonal and clean. He’s kind of like the angel of death. He creeps up on you.
Anyway, I’m glad you are enjoying the story thus far. Thanks for reading.
–Pam
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Ranger adds a whole new element of thrills to the story,he is definitely not a nice guy.
I wonder if Lenny and Trish can survive him……this is so good!!!
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Thanks, Michael. That means a lot. I’m pleased that you are enjoying it.
–Pam
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I tell you,I keep looking for a new chapter every day when I sign on….I get excited when I see a new entry. This is some quality storytelling!!
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You build it so well Pam…waiting for the next installment.
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Appreciate that, Max.
–Pam
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I feel like I’ve turned into a millennial–I have no patience. I want instant gratification and all the rest of the story now.
The killer is definitely a very smooth operator, btw. To be so blase about it…and then even
do a little acting as if concerned…
Probably what the killers are like that Putin keeps hiring to poison his opponents.
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Yeah. I don’t know how much more I’ll post. I kind of like where it’s going though.
Poisoning is one of the worst things you can do to someone. It’s so diabolical. I want the hitman to be a cold fish…but I want him to be a human cold fish. Ha!
I’m glad you’re enjoying it, Stacey. Thanks for reading.
–Pam
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Late to this, as not long back from holiday. Enjoying Ranger. He’s the kind of character a franchise could be built around.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thanks, Pete. Hope you had a good holiday.
–Pam
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You’re excellent with tension and suspense.
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Thank you. That’s very kind of you.
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“Disgust mixed with caustic bile scorched his throat”
Now that’s a line!
The lift scene was great too, well not so great for someone
Another great part Pam.
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It’s diabolical, Mikey, if I do say so myself. Ranger is a horrible person. He’s a hitman, for crying out loud. But, he’s strangely likable. I like it. I’ve been able to walk that tightrope pretty well–so far. It’s a tricky little twist though. It’s hardly novel and you can’t play it too long, or too straight because it steers the narrative into choppy waters. Think the Silence of the Lambs prequels and sequel. I don’t want to go there.
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